Rlol's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[One Life Remaining (WIP)]

first, sorry for bad english :p (i'm french)
you said you wanted me to be honest, so here it is : 1.5/5
i'm not saying you're a bad creator but this is your first song and i know you can improve :)
first of all, the repetitive melody is kinda strange, doesn't look so reached. i don't know how we call the music notes in english, but using C# and D# is REALLY strange (yes, i know, when i hear a note i know what it is :p)
then, the drums are really messed up, we can't find the rythm easily, we must think, and try to think on a music isn't good in my opinion.
at 00:32 melody becomes interesting, but the fact that you don't use snares in the drum lines makes the music a little poor, if you know what i mean (i don't know if it's your goal to make it sound like that)
at 00:48, using E is not really good (music note xd)
at 01:20, we're waiting for a drop, but i know it's a WIP so... :)
i know you might find that strange that i tell you all that but i did no music, anyway it's been play 9 years since i play piano...
last thing, can you tell me how you call the notes in english plz xD (in french it's do ré mi fa sol la si do)
waiting for more music ! :D
-Rlol-

sigma16 responds:

Thanks for being honest :P Im trying to improve with a brand new song i plan on making, I hope to vary things a bit more there. The same pattern is repeating because i wanted to keep it simple, not using too many patterns. And the notes in english :/ well, you could just use the letters like you did before (C,D,E,F,G,A,B,C) ;)

[touhou: night of nights]

Yo man this song is awsome :)
I just wanna know something: did you use the midi file and edit the instruments ?
Or did you do anything by yourself ?
now I rate 5 stars and I came from Geometry Dash :)
and I think your a good artist :)

[Sunset Park Act 3]

This is an awsome song.
I just wanna say I used it for my level in Geometry Dash and it fits perfectly.
If you wanna check it out just find Geometry Dash Rlol on youtube and look at my video sunset park.
This song could be a bit longer but we dont care, when it is so good like that :)
I hope you will continue making remixes of sonic themes
*Rated 5 stars*